Join up at Carrot Ranch for this week’s prompt from Charli. Her story is especially poignant and thought provoking this week. America does not take care of its veterans.

Yellow Tent for Sale

“Yellow tent for sale, never used. Complete with stakes and poles. Good for camping trips. $99, OBO. Sleeps four comfortably. Inquiries at…”

I squinted at the ad as I picked up the phone. Files littered my desk. Paper clipped photos of children stared back at me vacantly.

“Hello? I’m interested in the tent. Would $70 do? Great, I’ll pick it up today. Cash only–I understand.”

I grabbed my keys and stuck my head into my boss’ office.

“Got another tent for a family. Be back in ten.”

Author’s notes:

For those unfamiliar with OBO, the acronym means “or best offer.” It’s common to put this in personal sales ads.

Whenever I see or hear the word tent now, I think of refugee families. American, Syrian, Mexican–whomever, wherever. I leave it up to you to decide where this flash fiction story takes place and who they’re helping. It could take place in the past in WWII, present with Syria or Greece, or even sometime in the future with all the parties changed and switched around.

Song: “Refugee“, Tom Petty & The Heartbreakers

3 Comments on “Flash Fiction: Yellow Tent for Sale

  1. Pingback: Yellow Tents « Carrot Ranch Literary Community

  2. I like that you left this general enough to allow the reader to imagine different groups. It’s part of what makes it a powerful story. Thanks!

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